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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line 
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Prism ships set sail A coloring of heartaches In a sea of light Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I have a special place in my heart for prisms. Therefore, I especially love this poem. Cheers sir! ~L |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Mr.M, Very vivid, lovely Haiku. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ahhh . . . To think of heartaches afloat in a sea of redeeming light! ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
this haiku is packed in so few words of a very emotional feeling. |
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