Open Poetry #49 |
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The Gatherer |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA ![]() |
The Gatherer~ An old beat up ford carries the load of sweet smelling pine, scraps and trimmings from the Christmas tree lots, fallen boughs in the park, pinecones longing to be adornments, gifts upon the ground to his eyes. Cheeks apple red from a biting wind as he stoops, quickly wiping his nose with a sap stained tattered glove, gathering every coveted branch, he needs so many now. Evergreen branches and chicken wire.. Blankets for the dead. A sack full of decorations waits in the corner of the garage, large red bows to crown his creations, a mix of shiny and rustic, along with the traditional small stuffed animals wired to the center of a lush green bed. Saw-horses hold a frame as he works meticulously finishing each one..no holes or bare spots, he lays them down to wait in a night of stars for December's journey to the cemetery. Next morning their tips are flocked with frosted beauty, not from a can, but nature herself. Loading time.. carefully stacked, season after season.. delivering blankets for the dead. He's gone now, but each December his words are recalled softly as the first snowfall upon the evergreen.. "A neglected grave is a shameful thing". © Jan~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
What a very special Xmas thought and tradition. This is quite unique and I like it very much. ~L |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Thank you L, This was an Uncle's tradition from many yrs. ago, I try to keep it up..with help. We try to give cloth blankets out when we can to those in need, blankets for the living, our dead would have wanted it that way. Thanks again for reading. Rainyday J. |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
"A neglected grave is a shameful thing". Indeed it is. So is the same with poetry which exists to define moments and times like these you carefully write of. Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I read this with wonderment and smiles throughout the poem, even the ending gave me pleasure, his lasting words should be a reminder to not neglect the graves ourselves. ~ My inner world is my paradise and I am its keeper ~ |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
You have kept his spirit alive through these living words.. That warm feeling in your heart, when you think of him--is him. Indeed a good read for the season, and anytime. ice "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Thank you Mr. M, Yes, Poetry can be neglected, crumpled Poems tossed, those ignored, or dusty on the shelf. So many things are neglected these days. |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
I'm glad it made you smile JP, thank you for reading. |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
What a touching reply ice, Thank you. |
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Pete_W Member Posts 185 Scotland (UK) |
Wonderful poem, full of warmth and thoughtfulness, thanks for sharing, enjoyed reading this. Pete |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Thank you Pete, pleased you liked. |
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