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Open Poetry #49
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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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In The Mirror
0 posted 2014-02-18 08:52 AM

Waiting for a train
To take me home to Rita
Rusty railroad track

...and a newspaper from 1949.

...just bein' Bluesy
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2014-02-18 08:59 AM

...and the last line is killer!

Lori
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2014-02-18 09:41 PM

enjoyed...James
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2014-02-21 07:56 PM

Nice little snapshot!!
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
4 posted 2014-02-22 12:54 PM

Can truly relate though my paper is more in the 5o's...good piece.

j.
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