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Open Poetry #49

The Breezes Say... Shhh!!

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

0 posted 2015-12-18 02:01 PM

willows are weeping
a secret they are keeping
one they must not tell

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2015-12-18 03:10 PM

So true, willows are great for secret keeping.

~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (12-18-2015 03:54 PM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2015-12-19 06:44 AM

Beautiful and stirring ... fine ears might capture the secret tune played by the breeze in harmony with the willow's branches.

Margherita

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

3 posted 2015-12-19 11:08 AM

Thanks JerryPat and Margherita!

88's friends

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2015-12-19 09:11 PM

Tf,
I like this. When nature talks, poets tend to listen. ~L

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

5 posted 2015-12-19 09:15 PM

Thanks Miss Lori!

88's friend

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

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