Open Poetry #49 |
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My Vagrant Heart |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line ![]() |
Our fingers lay entwined In embraces all their own Loving in a forest of proclivity Sparkling stardust Falls from your eyes As tears from an angel Thin shafts of light Curled like tendrils Illuminate your face Gentle as a child's hand You have touched me And my vagrant heart Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Conceived in paradise to cause tremors on Earth! I think, Mr. Martini, today there will be heard quite a few thuds of hearts collapsing on dream meadows ... Your "vagrant heart" inspires as it echoes throughout forests of proclivity. ![]() Margherita |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
A nice concept-- a vagrant heat, has possibly found a home.. Smooth work Mr. M |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Kind Sir, This is quite precious, a different facet of the gem that wrote ‘Breach of Trust’. ~L |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
In the words of the late John Denver, "Someday's A Diamond Someday's A Stone". I agree with Miss Lori Martini. This is as radically different from yesterdays "Breach of Trust" as yin is to yang, diabolical to demure. Those meds are really paying off. ![]() Okay, all kidding aside, this was fine poetry for anyone's heart. Its a wonderful human experience when someone touches us in such a loving way that it inspires our pen to glide so effortlessly across a page. 88's friend ![]() She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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