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Open Poetry #49

The Breath of Angels

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2014-02-21 10:06 AM

the breath of angels wafting
into the sails of my ship
sailing me home to you

to the ill of my spirit comes this herb
as with the breath of a thousand angels
upon which your fragrance flows

stay within my thoughts
embrace this blessed breeze
and wait for me sweet lover

lay with me on silken shores
kiss me softly, then tell me
that my journey has ended

...just bein' Bluesy

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

1 posted 2014-02-21 10:21 AM

Bluesy very nicely written.I feel your angst.

Sincerely, jo

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2014-02-21 11:10 AM

Wetland, I mean swamp, I mean Marsh-

I hear a tender melody to this. You didn't alert me. I can see this being sung at a funeral.

Lori

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

3 posted 2014-02-21 11:26 AM

Now you have me chuckling at a funeral. No wonder everyone is staring.

Gotta stop drinkin' this stuff, or is it that goofy pipe.

...just bein' Bluesy

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2014-02-21 07:42 PM

I think that's a nice way to go, thanks for slow sail, it definitely had a calming effect.

Really nice poem~

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

5 posted 2014-02-21 07:52 PM

Thanks for the really nice compliment!

From one 'Blues' to another.

...just bein' Bluesy

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2014-02-22 05:23 PM

enjoyed...nice title...James

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2014-12-20 05:13 PM

quote:
the breath of angels wafting
into the sails of my ship
sailing me home to you

Very captivating words, Bluesy. You are missed on Pip. Enjoyed diving tonight to pick this lovely poem up.

Margherita

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