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Open Poetry #49

Our Fondest Dreams

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2016-02-04 01:42 PM

    Our Fondest Dreams

Step beyond all the clocks,
deep sorrows, and  regrets
which compel our lives into
this  timeless forest world.
Here, the evening-twilight
mist has cleared and ancient
oaks have brushed the sky
  of clouds
revealing an infinity of
  lambent stars.
A winter moon paints
the scene in dancing
  shadows,
frosted moonlight,
and a fine elixir of
serene tranquility
past the farthest edge
of our fondest dreams
on lasting love and
  eternal Spring.

           --- b. e. adams (1/4/2016)

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

1 posted 2016-02-04 06:47 PM

quote:
"frosted moonlight,
and a fine elixir of
serene tranquility"

Beautiful weaving of words throughout your stellar poetry SHDP. These few that I quote stood tall among the others for me.

Many 88's friend

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2016-02-04 08:50 PM

pleasure to read...james

secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2016-02-04 09:31 PM

Thanks 'TF' and JM !

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

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So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2016-02-04 09:52 PM

You paint lovely masterpieces on this blue canvas, Bruce.
Ida

secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2016-02-05 09:30 AM

Thanks, Ida !

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2016-02-06 06:13 PM

You see the harmony and create new patterns of beauty with your magical words, dear Bruce.

Truly a dream vision that brings tranquility and joy.

Love,
Margherita

"Forget every touch or sound that did not teach you how to dance."
(Rumi)

secondhanddreampoet
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7 posted 2016-02-06 06:59 PM

again ... thanks so much Ms. Margherita !

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