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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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somewhere in the apex of my manhood is a pulsating rhythm in concert with you and your thrilling womanhood there is this small throb within my center which is the core of who I am the radiance of me and it is your fire which ignites my passion, the birth of my love for you and your love’s pleasure chases away my dark as I swelter within myself dreaming of fantasies some which cannot be spoken about so . . . touch me there I bequeath myself to your longing I lean into you again and then again as you scratch your name into my spine ©February 2, 2016 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A very passionate moment, dear Jerry, which you render in a very vivid way. When mind and body harmonize we know what it means to be on fire.  Margherita "Forget every touch or sound that did not teach you how to dance." |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Many thanks coming your way for your sweet comments. And yeah, you're right . . . quote:Absolutely ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
A signature love to identify with. A masterful stroke of your pen here Jerry. The structure of your poem reminds of a scratcher I once knew. If I could read backwards I'd tell you her name. More feelings and fewer words please |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Heh.Heh Yeah, I ran across a few in my time, for sure, Ari. Only one made me want to try and find her and do her some bodily harm though. Thank goodness that never happened. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
"touch me there I bequeath myself to your longing I lean into you again and then again as you scratch your name into my spine" wow! love this esp...a flame igniting truly |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Good morning, jjote, hope your day will be good. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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