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Same Love |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Same Love As she walked away from me the scent of her perfume lingered for awhile as did the sweetness of her personality and the pleasures of her smile making me want to ponder and share these thoughts of love with you; love must be love that is true and nothing less will do, love must be experienced and shared by two, love doesn't feel real unless the object of your love knows and feels the same love too. JamesLee 6/2/16 |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
quote: In a word James, Perfect! More feelings and fewer words please |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"love doesn't feel real unless the object of your love knows and feels the same love too." Nice writing, James! JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I Agree Love should be felt in many ways not just words. Best to you, jo |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
this is so true james, love is a very special thing between two people, I loved the way you concluded your poem have a nice day yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
thank you Ari, JL, latearrival and 2islander2 for the nice response...james |
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