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Open Poetry #49
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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
0 posted 2014-02-25 01:43 PM

snow on the roses
hiding their color from me
like when you take your love

...just bein' Bluesy
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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2014-02-25 02:07 PM

Ahhh . . . a bluesy kind of poem . . .

~*~ It's not that the man did not know how to juggle, he just didn't have the balls to do it. ~*~
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2014-02-25 02:17 PM

excellent metaphor! WITOT- Wished I'd thought of that.

Lori
Bluesy Socrateaser
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3 posted 2014-02-25 03:05 PM

Thanks Jerry and Miss Lori. I'm only now digging up some old stuff and its pleasing to know it favors well.

...just bein' Bluesy
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2014-02-25 09:33 PM

enjoyed...James
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