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icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2014-02-26 11:26 PM

It's snowing lightly
and I miss you,
scent of your skin
flashing smile
sound of your voice,
fiery eyes
quicksilver face
and your mind.

God!
Your mind!

Arms and legs
wrapped tight around me,
shuddered breath
without fear,
warmth
wetness
and soul.

Beloved Princess
friend,
mother,
woman,
lover,
it's snowing lightly
and I miss you.

©2003, 2014 by icebox

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2014-02-27 02:28 AM

Says so much about the desires of the heart.
Excellent write.
Ida

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2014-02-27 06:12 AM

Deeply touching. Precious, loving, tender tribute...brought tears to my eyes. This is special.

Lori

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

3 posted 2014-02-27 07:27 AM

something stirs when we tune into nature, creating such a lovely poem

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

4 posted 2014-02-27 07:35 AM

Intimate and delicate recollections well penned.

Sweet sorrows never perish.

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2014-02-27 08:42 AM

You reached into the depths of wonderment and deep passion to pen this very poetical poem of love.

~*~ It's not that the man did not know how to juggle, he just didn't have the balls to do it. ~*~

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

6 posted 2014-02-27 03:23 PM

Delicate words
spoken only to
A soul mate.
Beautiful

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

7 posted 2014-03-01 04:19 AM

Tenderly powerful and powerfully tender, Charly, and, of course, as always, superbly written and beautiful.

Owl

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

8 posted 2014-03-01 02:22 PM

Thank you all for the kindness of your comments.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2014-03-01 07:00 PM

enjoyed reading this...James

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

10 posted 2015-03-21 08:06 PM

You make me miss her too. Hope that makes sense.

A

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