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Staying Hip |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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I'm cool, dude I'm hip to all the jive I mean I'm drivin' it like I stole it It's keeping me alive, man Too cool for school I have a slogan don't ya know Stay with the trends, mo'fo Thass whot I'm talking 'bout Yeah Uh huh . . . Gettin' me some cornrows tomorrow ©October 3, 2016 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Far out dude! It's outta sight! I'm hip! Can you dig it! (Did I say all that?) Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yup! You said all that. Heh.Heh Thanks Ari. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
quote:This is pure gold "mo'fo"! Brings back fond memories of $10 tickets and screaming girlfriends! Your writing made my morning joe so much richer Mr. Jerry! ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Heh.Heh And I thank you profusely Mr. Bluesy. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
you need to recite that with a stogie stuck to your lower lip  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yeah, you're right, Rex, have to practice that move. Thanks! ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
Not a stogie JerryPat, but one of those "insect clips"!  I really like your poems and this was a fun read!I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Heh.Heh There ya go, DV! Insect clips would be just the thing. Thank you ever so much for stopping by and giving me your thoughts and fine words. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (10-31-2016 09:17 AM).] |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Your title made me smile. Have to blow the dust off that term, and "cool" has grown old and moldy too. I can't keep up with the latest jargon and I work at a high school! But I think today one wants to be "sick". But for all I know, that one is outdated too. Loved your last line-I about blew coffee out of my nose. ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Heh.Heh You are something else, Lori. I'm sure not all that hip, just playing word games here. Thank you. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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