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Open Poetry #49

Tears From A Flame

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2014-01-14 08:47 PM

My love lies sleeping
Silent candle wax weeping
Into pools of dreams

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2014-01-14 10:51 PM

Ahhh . . . Dream pools sustain us when nothing else will. Great senryu.

If the mob governs, man is ruled by ignorance; if the church governs, he is ruled by superstition; if the state governs, he is ruled by fear.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2014-01-14 11:18 PM

Lovely

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2014-01-15 01:31 AM

Superb, enigmatic. So many haiku's don't lift off the ground, but this one does!

Owl

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

4 posted 2014-01-15 03:36 PM

Many thanks to all.

...just bein' Bluesy

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

5 posted 2014-01-16 01:25 AM

Very nicely done, enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2014-01-16 03:40 AM

this is so quiet and appealing, the atmosphere is full of simplicity end grace, like in a dream, loved it,

yann

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