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Deeper Into My Dreams
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Deeper Into My Dreams |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Slipping off into sweet scented slumber encircled in your arms Your lullaby breathing gentle upon my skin drawing me deeper into my dreams where you are waiting for me with that smile |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You captured the moment precious. ~*~ Better pass boldly into that other world, in the full glory of some passion, than fade and wither dismally with age.--James Joyce ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (03-20-2014 09:29 AM).] |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
absolutely SUPERB succinct Romanticism at its very best! To love, perchance to dream! ... |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Absolutely beautiful ! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jerry, Thanks for commenting on this one. I thought I had already replied-obviously not! You are too kind. Lori  |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Bruce, What a lovely thing to say, thank you so much. Same apology to you as to Jerry. Lori |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Kaoru, I'm so happy you liked this poem. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Lori |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice and romantic...James |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
sweet bliss when it's like this, ain't it? |
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