Open Poetry #49 |
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Invisible waves |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity ![]() |
* * * There was that couple kissing very close to the point where our paths crossed. The electromagnetic waves caused a storm of breathtaking intensity. It didn't come from them though. It occurred between us, though our eyes had met just furtively for a split second. Two hearts that recognize each other and communicate without words, across walls, through the ether, at enormous distance, a distance that is filled with pure matter of love. A furtive glance had been enough to start a cosmic tremor. Invisible waves labeled with our names which perform a unique, joyous dance on the platform of our colliding hearts. * * * |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
And Margherita, it can, and does, happen just like you so wonderfully described. When the chemistry is right all it takes is a look, a penetrating look. A niece of mine was walking down a city sidewalk during lunch hour. A man was walking down the sidewalk opposite her. He saw Carolyn and yelled across the street loudly over the street noise, "Stop walking you are my future wife!" She did stop and stared at him. He almost got ran over as he fought traffic to get to her. They were married in less than a year. She bore him children and the man died far too young from cancer. ~*~ Why is bra singular and panties plural? ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, dear Jerry, what an amazing story, with a sad conclusion, but that was no doubt a happy marriage until it lasted and such love will go on forever ... beyond earthly limits. Thank you for sharing this with me. Fantastic! Yes it happens just so. Thank you for your loving comment on my words. Margherita ![]() |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Margherita, my answer. understanding your post. To a Stranger~ I remember you You were dressed in blue And I was passing by You smiled and I nodded my reply many months have passed But I cannot deny That each time I pass that site I keep an open eye. [This message has been edited by latearrival (04-26-2014 10:45 PM).] |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
It has always puzzled me that some people think that humans with such intensity of feeling just one day cease to be. Ida |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Margherita, When you talk about love it isn't just an emotion anymore, it becomes a mechanism of the Universe! Keep on writing! the more you do the more your world becomes a reality for us to share. Bless your heart Lori ![]() |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
You joyously put into words and poem this wonderful moment when occurring takes us by surprise, as it can't be explained because itis just is.....magic |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Martyjo, thank you so much for your kind comment and for sharing with us your own wonderful poetic rendering of such a "moment of sparks" that can never be ignored, nor forgotten, It is an amazing event, isn't it!? Love and peace ... and joy in remembering ![]() Dear Ida, thank you so much for your very perspicacious comment. I so agree with you, it simply can't be that there is nothing after this incredibly complex and rich existence here on Earth. Consciousness is the key ... we may appear to be individuals with many attempts to reach perfection, but still somehow "incomplete" ... but on the soul level we are linked and we become truly One, from One Source, the Divine Source where we simply are part of Eternity. Thank you, sending you a big hug. Dear Lori, thank you from my heart for your loving comment. Indeed LOVE is Universal and it is what connects us all, but we become more aware of it when we live it as a peak experience between two souls no doubt, when we realize fully that we are glued together, merging to become one. It is spectacular! Love and hugs. Dear EmmaRose, thank you so much for your most loving comment. Yes it is magic, as it seems to happen on its own, unexpected, like a lightning in a blue sky. Love and hugs. Margherita ... have all a wonderful Sunday! ![]() "Love is the One who masters all things; I am mastered totally by Love." (Rumi) |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Well said; when one soul evles, we all evolve. ![]() |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Somewhere in Time! Loved this. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
a pleasure to read...James |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hi Margherita, i love some images (colliding is extremely at purpose) and you point out wuth poetry the extremely important word of feelings (invisible), this made a rich reading indeed, full of pleasure and grace, have a sunny sunday (i can imagine it in Italy) regards yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
That's a great concept, dear Charly, thank you for looking in here and for commenting so kindly. Thank you so much, dear Kathleen, for your kind reply. Dear James, thank you kindly for your appreciation. Dear Yann, thank you for your most loving comment and your wishes. Wishing you too a great week. Love and peace. Margherita ![]() |
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