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Your Cheating Heart
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Your Cheating Heart |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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Decided to go a few years back, although I don't have any idea if it will be considered a "good" poem, or even if it will be allowed to stand, but is still my kind of trash. praying is easy when trouble is about your sky is crashing around you catastrophically French-kissing you like a vulture cursing God because of nightmarish visions fearing God for the reason of the curse what did you do old life, adieu soulless choir sings your dirge your sunset the kind postcards never depict trying to sum up your peccadillo's li-de-da a most defining moment you know its wrong but you're not strong what we have here, lustful urgings do you catch my drift a line crossed in the libido defining moment this new love-lust sequence neighbor's wife hot-to-trot watch like a hawk eyes that do stalk high heels tapping suggestively down the sidewalk like guns in battle male ego readily available for conquest her volatile teasing hidden from view green-eyed feline dangerous as a drag-queen with a bowie knife nothing to gain riding this train no man so tall as when he stoops to pet a pussycat her pussycat purrs, satisfied her warfare of marriage-wrecking on track makes you feel s-o-o important such an immoral lie man is so weak for this technique invite you in upfront, personal taste-drive swabbed with unscrupulous tongue your vows (marriage) dulled by her charms your wife shopping, her hubby at work haha, hoho, what could be better one of peta* this sleek cheetah dining on Château de Glory Hole smiling like a self-satisfied serial-killer, dog-paddling in paradise blind to lust and a wild insurance-collecting plot hubby, home early, shots rang out find yourself room temperature you in your grave, her hubby in jail entrepreneurs your wife and her ©February 7, 2006 / Jerry Pat Bolton *peta-: one million billion (formed from penta-, on the model of "tera" [as if from "tetra-"]; so called because it represents 1,000 to the fifth power) ~*~ Less depends on the size of the dog in a fight than the size of the fight in the dog. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (05-19-2014 12:44 PM).] |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Wow! Is that where you started perfecting your last line kicker? What a tale this was. I never saw the end coming. Good job! Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Lori. I think the last line kicker was started earlier than this. I can't even remember starting it, it just evolved as I kept writing poetry. ~*~ Less depends on the size of the dog in a fight than the size of the fight in the dog. ~*~ |
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