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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2014-05-27 06:17 PM

I didn't like the poem. Needed more work.

~*~ The poor wish to be rich, the rich wish to be happy, the single wish to be married, and the married wish to be dead. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (05-27-2014 10:02 PM).]

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

1 posted 2014-05-27 08:41 PM

feed the senses......this poem does it
for me though, it would be Tofutti , Im dairy free

though I enjoyed your chocolate nirvana

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2014-05-27 09:39 PM

Thanks Emma, guess I got a bit carried away, just couldn't help myself.

~*~ The poor wish to be rich, the rich wish to be happy, the single wish to be married, and the married wish to be dead. ~*~

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