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Sunrise Serenade
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Sunrise Serenade |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Chirping in the dark Singing at the crack of dawn Welcoming the light |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Excellent haiku this morning, Lori. Positive all the way. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Haikus are the freshest form of poetry in my opinion and yours is a fine example! Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Jerry, Been hearing the little birdies on the way to work in the still dark morning. You know how nature inspires me and there you have it. ~L |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
PU True Haiku being strictly about nature are then inherently Spiritual to me and I like your use of the word "fresh" to describe it. There was a time when I was writing a Haiku/senryu every morning to wake up, with my coffee.~L |
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david3 Junior Member
since 2013-03-02
Posts 15ohio |
difficult format to deliver real meaning, but you managed it quite well. excellent work. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
i really feel all that, when i ride at morning, just as the light comes alive, great work for me that bring a delicious light indeed, thanks yann |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thank you david3 for you generous complement! ~L |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
As always Yann, thank you so much! ~L |
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