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Open Poetry #50

Love me

rosepetals46
New Member
Posts 3
PA, USA

0 posted 2020-07-07 02:35 PM

just love me for now
so I don't feel so alone
fleeting connection

~rosepetals46
-wasrospetals26 once upon a time

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

1 posted 2020-07-07 05:07 PM

rosepetals, Enjoyed your Haiku.

Sky~

Sometimes..Miracles are just good people
with kind hearts~

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

2 posted 2020-07-08 03:46 AM

Well written, it has an immediacy that I love.

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2020-07-08 09:07 PM

Been here. Sad but well done.

"How much is real? So much to question
An epidemic of the mannequins
Contaminating everything"

Stone Sour

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2020-07-10 10:57 AM

love is always in the present, connection too, nicely done

yann

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

5 posted 2020-07-11 12:20 PM

Delicate and fragile this is.

Michael

Starmcneil 1955
Member
Posts 174
Alberta, Canada

6 posted 2020-08-14 11:13 AM

Sometimes love is just the surface and a person is still truly alone...this touched for I have felt and still feel that kind of loneliness...great writing...I read it over and over again

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