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Autumn (dbl. ended Acrostic)
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US 
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Autumn~ (dbl.ended Acrostic) Audacious Autumn, yet muted in sepiA Upend the fallen leaf,Septembers bandeaU Time for my bonfire of regret, stained burn'T Umber sins in flying ash, hurried red impromtU Mistakes rising silent, leaves dodgy momentuM Negotiates Winters impatience, but fall does reigN ©Augustsky |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I know it takes leaves dying to paint such a wonderful picture as Autumn does, but this poem breathes the liveliness the season always brings us. Winter can be cold...and even dreadful, but Autumn is a magical time... the cool mornings creeping hazily deeper and deeper into our hot days. The first wet clouds accumulating in the sky...the wind's promise of future storms. Definitely my favorite season. And just wow...at the double acrostic. Those are seriously hard. Michael |
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Forlorn Angel Member Posts 143 |
Wow this is so cool. And just in the time for the season. Fall is my favorite time of year however I never could put nature to pen very well! Loved it! |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Yes, it truly is magical, & invigorating to me. Thank you Michael, Acrostics are challenging, & I like that about them. Sky~ ~ Cherish Everything ~ |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Thank you Forlorn angel, my fav. too. Sky~ ~ Cherish Everything ~ |
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Starmcneil 1955 Member Posts 174 Alberta, Canada |
absolutely love this...it rings and fills my soul with joy |
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