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Open Poetry #50

A Frozen Moment

secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2017-05-21 01:03 AM

   A Frozen Moment

Just before the vast-
immortal dawn,
when the world is
still painted in
perfect moonlight
and brushed by
the gentle kiss of a
soft Spring breeze,
if I was Time’s master
I would freeze that
mystic moment
  forever
in eternal tribute
to the dream of a
Love that would
  never fade.

          --- b. e. adams (5/21/2017)

P.U Stinkenbaum
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1 posted 2017-05-21 01:20 AM

quote:
"Just before the vast-
immortal dawn,
when the world is
still painted in
perfect moonlight
and brushed by
the gentle kiss of a
soft Spring breeze"

Now this, Mr. Adams is poetry at it's finest. Airy and visible.

Just out looking for the real me...

secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2017-05-21 09:20 AM

Thank you for commenting on this l'il "poetic scribble" (and you an call me Bruce) ...

jwesley
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3 posted 2017-05-21 11:25 AM

Very nice my friend, as usual.

j.

secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2017-05-21 11:30 AM

Thanks, "J.!"

Poet In Pink
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5 posted 2017-05-21 02:23 PM

Hello Bruce So very beautiful are your words ~ Sounds like the perfect moment to freeze in time ~ Much enjoyed ~ Alana

secondhanddreampoet
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6 posted 2017-05-21 09:48 PM

Thank you, Alana !

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