Sitting In A Mood Swing With Miranda On The Veranda

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Open Poetry #50

Sitting In A Mood Swing With Miranda On The Veranda

P.U Stinkenbaum
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0 posted 2017-05-25 02:55 AM

She
left
behind
her
Mozart
as
her
smile
changed
and
her
weeping
spirit
echoed
with
the
essence
of
violins

Be nice to me youses, it's my first tall poem. Thamks!

Just out looking for the real me...

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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1 posted 2017-05-25 04:25 AM

Nice tall poem! I would have thought Miranda left her Benny Goodman behind but then there would not have been the violins. ~L

P.U Stinkenbaum
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2 posted 2017-05-25 01:04 PM

Hey there Lori Rhoden! Thanks for checkin' out my first 'tall poem'! Miranda and Benny's tunes? I should have talked you sooner Miss Lori 'cause she's done run off to go 'Stompin at the Savoy'!

An' I thought we was goin' out there on the verandy to do some smoochin'!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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3 posted 2017-05-25 02:02 PM

I thought maybe the swinging would go better with some Swing music. Hey, maybe she just had some hot feet and not hot lips. ~L

P.U Stinkenbaum
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4 posted 2017-05-25 02:13 PM

quote:
" maybe she just had some hot feet and not hot lips"

Right again Miss Lori! But then that was me all over...always puttin' Miranda's foot in my mouth!

Lips eh?

I never thought of that!

Just out looking for the real me...

Poet In Pink
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5 posted 2017-05-25 03:27 PM

Hello Stinky Looks like the "Tall" poems are catching on around here lol Not to shabby for your first ~ Practice makes perfect though lol The poem itself is very touching ~ I heard the violins ~ Pinky

P.U Stinkenbaum
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6 posted 2017-05-27 04:47 AM

Yeah Pinky, I took a chance. Sometimes it's better to 'join 'em' than to try and 'beat 'em!

Your talents are second to none my pinkly purveyor of pretty poetry, so like...what else could I do?

Just out looking for the real me...

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