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View From The Bottom Of The Bottle (Unplugged)
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View From The Bottom Of The Bottle (Unplugged) |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana 
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If it bends straighten it If it's straight bend it If it's square circle it If it's circular square it If you like it leave it If you don't change it So... Life is short you can't lengthen it What's real isn't What isn't is Dream into dream Live no tomorrows Casting of shadows Hides many sorrows (Plug it in before you turn it out...Thanks. 88's y'all!) She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Words to the wise and the other wise. Sometimes life is just better when you are swimming upstream. Ask any salmon and his girlfriend salmonella. ~L |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
interesting 'write!' ... great 'comment' to, Lori |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Hello TF pleased to meet you  Catchy title and sound advice ~ Like the song says...Live like you are dying ~ Enjoyed muchers ~ Alana |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
intriguing play of words, enjoyed |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
This sings to me, really enjoyed it! To the archive this one goes. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
"Life is short you can't lengthen it What's real isn't What isn't is" Hell yes! ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Ticklefingers, I like how you scoped this out 'big time!' Need to check out more of your poetry, I do, I do. ~miscellanea Great title, btw. |
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