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Dead end (villanelle)
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Dead end (villanelle) |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada 
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 Tall trees stand guard like soldiers by a trail luring me to search what fate awaits me I walk on keeling like a ship at sail. Breeze ruffles slightly upright fronds so frail a crazy path looms before me to see tall trees stand guard like soldiers by a trail. I feel some perky god wants me to fail in this my quest to reach a haven free I walk on keeling like a ship at sail. I won't be sidetracked from my holy grail a dead end by the bend I may tarry tall trees stand guard like soldiers by a trail. Through storms I risk to have my plans derail encounters I dare to shrug off in glee tall trees stand guard like soldiers by a trail I walk on keeling like a ship at sail. @jjote 01/26/2017 |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
trees are the only soldiers that i like, loved the images and the sweet walk in company have a good day yann |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Picture perfect poetry. Really wonderful reading. |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
Thanks Islander and Blues for dropping by to comment. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
such imagery, loved the photo as well. Love is the life of the soul... |
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