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An Unobscured View Of Her Resonance
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An Unobscured View Of Her Resonance |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror 
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A navy blue Maui shore empties among the rhythmic sound of sea gulls and waves A cold Corona and a rusty binocular combined with a cute girl that passes reminding me of the more sensory pleasures of life ...just bein' Bluesy |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
VERY well done ! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Exellent, my friend. Remember it well when the aircraft carrier I served on spent a month in Hawaii...much of my time was free and spend a ton of it on the beach... Very well written! j. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Thank you Bruce. Good to see you around the place. I appreciate your reply. BTS ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Thanks, Jimmy. I was a jarhead just passing through, which over the years, I've done about a half a dozen times...with the same effect. BTS ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Excellent snapshot! could have been a beer commercial. Loved it! ~L |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
A beer commercial? Why not? Just get a hold of my agent Lori Rhoden...then get a hold of me!  ...just bein' Bluesy |
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