Open Poetry #50 |
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The Thought Of Falling In Love |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror ![]() |
It took me awhile to know the difference between her painted smile and her self assurance After all, I was falling in love The way we met, our eyes fixated, looking back I should have waited, but then one touch and I was baited After all, I was falling in love How long those warm summer breezes blew from across the bay into her room where our passions played with our hearts renewed After all, we were falling in love Still, it took me awhile to know the difference between her love and my assurance, that I, had fallen in love ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Eh . . . It happens quite frequently, Bluesy, that two people can fall in love with one another and have different degrees of "falling in love." One is held very deep within the one, while the other may have just fallen in love with falling in love. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Precisely Sir! Many thanks JerryPat. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I'm giving serious thought to leaving this site completely. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
It's always been an odd little place. It was when I got here and it will be when I leave...again. You've certainly put you're all into it and we both will do as we wish, to be sure. Always my best to you JerryPat, whatever you choose. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Bluesy, i can think this is the best way to be sure of loving someone, to care also about truth, your words are signifiant and pleasant, have a good day yann |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a fine and thoughtful 'write!' |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
its funny how a touch seems to make the words come out easier...james |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Thank you yann...be well. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Always appreciate your visits Bruce. Many thanks. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Thank you for your comment James. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Love! The highs of heightened senses -- and the lows of inner turmoil. I liked this, Bluesy. A |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Nothing new from here, my friend, I agree with all the comments above. j. |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Bluesy... It's like the old saying, " When Love finds you there ain't no use trying to hide" Enjoyed... Paul |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I'm glad this little gem got bounced back up to the top and I read it! Very nice! ~L |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Thank you so much Alison. I'm so glad you're more active here in open. This forum needs you. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
S'okay j! Happy to have you reading. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Thank you so much Paul. Good to see you about the place! ![]() ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Thank you Miss Lori. You're the "gem" around here! ![]() ...just bein' Bluesy |
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