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Open Poetry #51

Forever On Sunday

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2021-07-05 08:29 PM

Forever on Sunday,
your heart stopped beating.
It was Father’s Day.
Forever on Sunday,
I will remember
kissing you goodbye.
Forever on Sunday
I will count the weeks
as they pass
without you.
Forever on Sunday,
it will never be the same.

LGR(C)7/5/21

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

1 posted 2021-07-07 03:04 PM

Heart wrenching & Beautiful at the same time.

Loved the Title also..
Hugs..

Sky~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2021-07-07 04:15 PM

Bless your heart Sky. Thank you ~L

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2021-07-09 12:29 PM

O lori, this is so sad, this day will never be the same, I lost my dad and mam just the last year and this one, your poem shake my heart
yann

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2021-07-10 03:16 PM

Sorry to hear about your parents Yann. Fortunately mine are still living. Dennis is my first big loss. So I'm taking this grief stuff one day at a time.~L

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

5 posted 2021-07-10 04:00 PM

Touching, in a very melancholy way.

I truly feel you on this.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2021-07-12 05:58 AM

Michael,
Bless your heart! ~L

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