Stitch me with sunlight...

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Stitch me with sunlight...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2000-08-25 01:35 AM

Stitch me with sunlight and dry the blood
Of the open gash...
It’s only a stream that runs in the mud
Of the early spring
When Apollo’s gray hands raise up the lash
And the horses’ hoofs strike vernal ink...

Check out my poetry here:

http://cafepoetry.com/stage1/andrey_kneller.htm#My%20Hamlet

Janie
Member

since 2000-08-13

Posts 158

1 posted 2000-08-25 01:44 AM

Very good! Love the first line especially.

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