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chitri New Member
since 2001-02-02
Posts 2 |
I remember a feeling that used to make me smile. I remember a look that made every second worth while. I cannot live without this memory I cannot dream without your imaginary prescence. and the more I think, the more I wonder if you were the perfume or the essence. A thick fog surrounds my every thought I realize all the pain you brought but I´ll never regret and your smile, I´ll never forget. |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Hi Chitri, Welcome to CA. I see you're new here. I don't have time right now to chat but just wanted to welcome you. Check your email for a welcome message from the forum. Pete Imagination is more important than knowledge Albert Einstein |
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warmhrt Senior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563 |
Hello, I enjoyed reading your poem, though I hesitate to critique on the first post (don't want to scare people away...just kidding  ). I do want to add my welcome, and hope to see more of your work.Kris "It is wisdom to know others; It is enlightenment to know one's self" - Lao Tzu |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
Chitri, welcome. Great feeling in this poem. Wonder why this person left you though? [This message has been edited by epoet (edited 02-08-2001).] |
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