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Critical Analysis #1
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Rblueyes16
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since 1999-11-16
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midland texas AMERICA
0 posted 1999-11-16 10:34 AM

Why were we out at 4 AM?
Would things be different if we'd stayed in?

Would she still be alive for me to talk with?
She's been gone so long she seems like a myth

Why did I let her take them all?
It was only a matter of time before the downfall.

If we weren't rebelling she'd still be alive.
If only, If only she would have survived.
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