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Maverick Wolf Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 94Scandia, MN |
Look into your eyes, for the eyes hold all truth. What do you see? Do you see the eyes of an age-old wise owl? Or do you see the slyness of a fox? Do you see the pride of an eagle? Or do you see the smallness of a mouse? Do you see the tenacity of a wolf? Or do you see the peacefulness of a butterfly? Do you see the piercing glance of a panther? Or do you see the warm glance of a friend? Do you see the sinister look of the rattlesnake? Or do you see the innocent stare of a newborn? Look into your eyes and see who you are. Beauty may be in the eye of the beholder, but the eye of the beholder, tells more about them, than what they see as beauty. |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Interesting little piece, liked it a lot. especially the last two lines, great moral. I'll be interested in seeing more of your work.  ------------------ "All is gone except the will to be." - Metallica - "For Whom the Bell Tolls" |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Very interesting...I must agree...to me, the eyes are a mirror to a person's soul. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Yes, definitely interesting. I enjoyed it. I too believe that the eyes are the mirror of the soul. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Prose.. I believe what you say here is a truth. What we see in someone's eyes can also be a reflection of ourselves.(or what we wish to see in the depths) It is all perception. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Brava...no truer truth can be spoken The last few lines tell it all!!! I enjoyed this immensely!!! Jenny Lee ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Maverick Wolf Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 94Scandia, MN |
Thank you all for your positive responses. This being my first post, I am glad that it was well recepted. Thank you all for your wonderful comments, it really means a lot to me. |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
What if you don't see anything but black? "Death marks the beginning, not the end. It is our journey to God." --Billy Graham |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
well.. as long as it was pulled from this far back.. nice job. i like the eyes. they're neat. "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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