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Open Poetry #2

walking

LoveAngel2000
Junior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 11
Knoxville, Tenessee (home of the Inbreds)

0 posted 1999-09-17 10:53 AM

Walking, walking, remembering all the I love you's there were. Thinking, thinking, about all those lies. Panting, panting, breathless am I. I just caught my boy friend cheating, and he tried to lie. :*(

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

1 posted 1999-09-22 01:19 PM

Short and to the point!!

Welcome!!!

Justbleu

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"

Julie
Senior Member

since 1999-08-20

Posts 739
Houston, TX

2 posted 1999-09-22 01:44 PM

Liked the use of repitition in this.

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Julie
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..."to thine own self be true."
>William Shakespeare

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