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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 1999-09-17 11:49 PM

My blue rose

She glows upon a tender stem.
This rose that I pursue.
A crown of thorns as diadem.
Her majesty shows blue.

Her attitude vasilates dim.
I analyze her soil.
She thinks my adjuration, whim.
And I, a foolish foil.

I cannot help this love I dare.
These minions of reveal.
I cannot stop, this aura's care.
Nor can I bare conceal.

I wish she stop the endless roil,
Or set the pot to boil.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 1999-09-18 12:11 PM

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-09-18 01:56 AM

Your rhthym and rhyme are superb Seymore

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 1999-09-18 01:17 PM

Nan,
I was hoping for a red rose HOHOHO.

Elizabeth

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Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

4 posted 1999-09-18 01:22 PM

I loved it, Seymour. Hope that you get your red rose...

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 1999-09-18 03:22 PM

Hoot and Elizabeth,
Two sweethearts, thank you both for the read
and nice words.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 1999-09-25 06:33 PM

A real beauty! I missed so much here the past few days, don't think I shall ever catch up! Glad I found this one!

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Denise

Julie
Senior Member

since 1999-08-20

Posts 739
Houston, TX

7 posted 1999-09-25 07:35 PM

Nan...you silly girl...those are petunias.

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Seymour: Sounds like you need another HUG!
(Where's RainbowGirl?...Gee)
Anyway...red roses?
Roses are red
Petunias are blue
I love the verse in YOU.

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 1999-09-25 10:19 PM

Dsnyder and Julie,
I thought this one was gone forever. Thank you so much for the wonderful comments.

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