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Open Poetry #2

Old Fashioned Me

Alicat
Member Elite

since 1999-05-23

Posts 4094
Coastal Texas

0 posted 1999-09-20 03:45 PM

A rose and candy given to thee,
Initials carved on willow tree;
Hand in hand in sunny park,
Low whispers till after dark.

Together we go to the matinee;
We think of each thoughout the day.
We watch the animals in the clouds
And laugh at the busy rush-hour crowds.

We see sun set and rising moon
Planning for our day in June.
Old fashioned is what we'll ever be
As we dream beneath the willow tree.

Alicat

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

1 posted 1999-09-20 03:51 PM

This is lovely...My sweet old fashioned gentleman. One of the many reasons why you hold my heart.

Alicat
Member Elite

since 1999-05-23

Posts 4094
Coastal Texas

2 posted 1999-09-20 04:07 PM

As you hold mine, my soul's desire.

Alicat, the melted, gooey, gushy, smushy, twitterpated kilted kitty

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 1999-09-20 04:18 PM

May an eavesdropper agree!? Well done!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-09-20 05:32 PM

Very fitting to the title...nicely done

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

5 posted 2000-03-05 10:54 AM

3 and 4 makes 34

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