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Open Poetry #2

To Love You

Seaangel
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 167
Auckland, New Zealand

0 posted 1999-09-01 11:37 PM

I say that I will die
but do not realise the day;
that whether fifty, eighty,
or nineteen,
I will stop
being
here
& never come back.
I want, therefore, to love you
before I leave.

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-09-02 02:10 AM

Very sweet, dear.

miriam
Member

since 1999-08-26

Posts 323
glendale,ca.

2 posted 1999-09-07 01:10 PM

short but to the point

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-09-07 06:14 PM

Not a wasted word and eloquently stated

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Seaangel
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 167
Auckland, New Zealand

4 posted 1999-09-12 03:56 AM

Severn, Miriam, hoot, thank you!!! I wasn't sure if it was long enough to convey my meaning... I am glad you enjoyed it!

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 1999-09-12 02:20 PM

Very sweet! The message was conveyed very well! Sometimes the short ones are the most powerful!

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Denise

Christopher

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

6 posted 1999-09-17 04:05 AM

Live in the now, for no one knows what will come with the morrow.
Well wrought angel of the ocean...

Carpe Diem!

juanita
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 68
Los Angeles, CA, USA

7 posted 1999-09-17 04:48 AM

welcome Seaangel, sweet poem.

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