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Open Poetry #2

Into the light

redwriter1
Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 480
Franklin, TN

0 posted 1999-09-09 07:49 AM

Into the light
> is where you brought me
> out of the darkness
> that was my home
>
> Into the sun
> you shone all around me
> & I closed my eyes
> and now I know
>
> I dont have to hide
> from day or night
> cause you alone
> brought me into the light

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 1999-09-09 08:31 AM

redwriter1,
Nicely done and may the light continue to shine on you.

moonmoon
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 277
TX , USA

2 posted 1999-09-09 09:02 AM

Yes, good job redwriter..I am so glad you found that perpetually shining light of your life..

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

3 posted 1999-09-09 09:28 AM

Very nice! It's a happy day when you can feel like that! Hope it stays with you forever!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-09-09 10:24 AM

Few words, but yet they speak in volumes...nicely done!!!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

redwriter1
Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 480
Franklin, TN

5 posted 1999-09-09 01:31 PM

Thank you, I know it's short. but that's really all I wanted to say (smile)

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

6 posted 1999-09-09 04:25 PM

Sometime it just doesn't take a lot of words to do that.....and you did it very well

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