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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
i could almost run i could almost hide if only i found the courage buried deep inside but i lack it i lack it all im your fall guy sucker to the end the user's best friend but just see if you can catch me in the end when i self implode in the sky i wont lie i wasnt meant to be living in self pity ------------------ |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Very emotional piece - I like how you used lower case "i" for yourself....I did that once in a poem where I was feeling "small & helpless".....it tends to make the author seem that way.....great job !! ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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