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Open Poetry #2

susieQ_luccier
New Member

since 1999-09-09

Posts 9
central illinois

0 posted 1999-09-15 09:52 AM

No tears,No sad faces
No time,No places
No loss,No gain
No hurting,No pain
No him,No me
No long time no see
No one here,No one there
No one to realy care

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 1999-09-15 07:24 PM

Wow Susie...this was very sad. Such few words, but they say so much.

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 1999-09-15 07:42 PM

I agree totally with Hoot Owl Susie, sad but nicely done...:

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~

susieQ_luccier
New Member

since 1999-09-09

Posts 9
central illinois

3 posted 1999-09-15 09:13 PM

Thank you for your responces. Im new at this and appriciate any feed back.

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