A Lazy Day at the Droverville Nat'l Park

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Open Poetry #1

A Lazy Day at the Droverville Nat'l Park

Poetwheel
Member

since 1999-07-07

Posts 208
Canada

0 posted 1999-07-10 11:54 AM

Parrots regurgitate crunchibles while I sit on well written bench.
The goodly bum at my feet coughs and smiles through his pine-sol'd sleep...
A lone dog pees
A madman screams
A child steals a congo-cone...
Diversification. Dyslexia.
Horror in a frozen treat.
Its all out there.
"YOU CAN'T PARK THERE!"
Ignoramus. Dis-enchantress.
Toilet free societal crapper.
Flushing. Flushing. Evermore...
Then, a pasty, albeit rum flavored sweep
of gorgonzola? Exeunt!

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~one voice~
Senior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

1 posted 1999-07-10 01:34 PM

Vivid, very vivid, Poetwheel! I liked it!

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~one voice~

For Myself, I live,
Live intensely and am fed by life,
and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James

Poetwheel
Member

since 1999-07-07

Posts 208
Canada

2 posted 1999-07-10 01:40 PM

Thanks one! This is about as deep as the Wheel gets... glad you enjoyed it...
PW

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Poetwheel
Member

since 1999-07-07

Posts 208
Canada

3 posted 1999-07-10 05:40 PM

Since I was asked via email...

Gorgonzola: rich cheese with bluish green veins.

So now you know!
PW

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thursdayschild
Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 169
Houston, Tx.

4 posted 1999-07-10 06:22 PM

Wow...this is awesome! Love the images you
created here. Good work!

Poetwheel
Member

since 1999-07-07

Posts 208
Canada

5 posted 1999-07-10 11:12 PM

hey thursday! Keep this up and people with think we're paying you!...
PW
PS The check is in the mail...

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Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

6 posted 1999-07-10 11:59 PM

Call me crazy. Call me ill
If you don't do it, someone will,
But I will never get my fill
Of happenings at Droverville.

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 07-11-99).]

Poetwheel
Member

since 1999-07-07

Posts 208
Canada

7 posted 1999-07-11 11:55 AM

Nice work Baladeer! I say, we must make you an honorary member of the Poetic Wheelbarrow! Your badge, propeller hat, 3D glasses and fake nose are being sent by courier. Thanks!
PW

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