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orpheus Junior Member
since 1999-07-10
Posts 30Portugal |
His lips are there Fainting in her mouth Drowning They are joining two pieces of a whole They are stealing each other's soul |
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snuffleupagus Junior Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 11 |
if his lips were fainting in her mouth, wouldn't they be slack? kindof like kissing a dead person. |
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blueloon Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 161NY |
How nice it is to be reminded of what a kiss should be. blueloon |
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