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Open Poetry #1

This Love

orpheus
Junior Member

since 1999-07-10

Posts 30
Portugal

0 posted 1999-07-23 05:58 PM

This love
Of light and shadows
Of dying colours
And naked words
Bleed
Feel
Hurt
Running through your mouth
And breaking on my lips

And I don't know how to tell you
That you are all that matters
And I am all that's left

That every single word
Inside of me
Is seeking you
So desperately
Beyond reach
And all my sorrows

Emmy
Member

since 1999-06-29

Posts 194
KY

1 posted 1999-07-23 07:22 PM

WOW...your poem conveyed such amazing desparation. Excellent.

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

2 posted 1999-07-23 11:50 PM

It's amazing how one person can make us feel
emotions that are so strong. Great writing here.

orpheus
Junior Member

since 1999-07-10

Posts 30
Portugal

3 posted 1999-07-24 08:06 PM

I guess anyone who post his/her poems is hoping to be understood. I guess I was. I thank you so for you gentle words.

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sometimes
we can only breathe
if we bleed a little

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