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Open Poetry #1

I am alone

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

0 posted 1999-07-26 01:52 AM

I am alone
again
waiting for you
to descend
My lips await
your touch
Melting in
our lust
Hold me
in your bound
Transcend
for I am found

Gentle Soul
Member

since 1999-07-12

Posts 273
Vinton,Ohio USA

1 posted 1999-07-26 08:15 PM

I am no poetry pro.
but I think yur poem has a nice flow..
I hope you find someone so you wont be alone..

being alone is no fun.. I know.. been there.. done that..

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-07-31 09:41 PM

Very nice flow with this one

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

3 posted 1999-08-01 03:14 AM

Hoot & Gentle,
thanks for reading!

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