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Open Poetry #1

Owner of a Lonely Heart

Cobra
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 58

0 posted 1999-08-01 12:22 PM

For years I remained faithful,
my heart belonged to him.
I followed all his orders,
and obeyed his every whim.

Now I see my errors,
I had played the fool.
How can I ever love again?
Why is my life so cruel?

Now my heart has frozen cold,
I will not let it break.
I fear my soul will bleed once more,
how much can I take?

I though it was wise to be cautious,
but it's gotten out of hand.
My fear and over-protectivness,
is more than I can stand.

So this is what I have become,
owner of a lonely heart.
No one will ever tresspass,
and nothing will ever start.

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Cammie

Mystic
Junior Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 13

1 posted 1999-08-01 12:32 PM

So sad! Beautiful writing Cammie. I hope this poem isn't about you!

Cobra
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 58

2 posted 1999-08-01 12:35 PM

No Mystic, the poem isn't about me! I'm glad too. I was writing about my friend Sonya. A few days ago she was sobbing and wailing all day on the phone about her boyfriend Drew. Thanks!
XOXOXO
Cammie

White Fang
New Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 8

3 posted 1999-08-01 12:49 PM

Wonderful poetry Cobra.

Interlude
New Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 9

4 posted 1999-08-01 01:30 AM

Hey girl!

Glad to hear you're not the subject of the poem. Good Work!

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Lulu

Candy Rain
Junior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 10

5 posted 1999-08-01 02:28 AM

I like your poem Cammie.

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