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Open Poetry #1

Last Kiss

Sally S.
Senior Member

since 1999-06-07

Posts 847
Ohio

0 posted 1999-08-03 08:07 PM

This kiss I give before I part,
Take it swiftly; Know from my heart
That though time has shattered dreams
And left in wake darkened schemes,
My love remains in yearning true.
Whilst this bereft soul cries out for you.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 1999-08-03 08:57 PM

Sally,
Beautifully written with not a single wasted word. Nice poem!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

2 posted 1999-08-03 09:48 PM

Short....to the point....meaningful

Sally S.
Senior Member

since 1999-06-07

Posts 847
Ohio

3 posted 1999-08-04 01:39 PM

Thank you both for the comments. I appreciate the feedback.

Cinderella
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 152
Arizona

4 posted 1999-08-04 05:46 PM

Wonderfully said Sally!

Psycodillica
Junior Member

since 1999-08-04

Posts 28
Lapeer,Mi,USA

5 posted 1999-08-04 05:53 PM

That is so sweet... Nicely done. Pat yourself on the back:-)
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