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Open Poetry #1

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Sue
Member

since 1999-08-04

Posts 383
France

0 posted 1999-08-04 04:22 AM

I'm going to fall and don't know when
or from what height.
I'm going to fall and don't know if
I'll land alright.
I'm in the dark, I wish I had
The power of sight.

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 1999-08-04 09:42 AM

I like this one! Very effective. Welcome to the family, Sue.

[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 08-04-99).]

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-08-04 09:43 AM

Nicely done....very much said with very few words and not a wasted word amoung them!!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

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