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Open Poetry #1

Haiku

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 1999-08-06 07:01 PM

First sign of jonquil
As breaks loose from mother earth
Reaching for the sun.

PrincessDoo
Junior Member

since 1999-07-30

Posts 41
Cerritos, CA, USA

1 posted 1999-08-06 08:03 PM

theres only one word that comes to mind when i read that...

ambition

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-08-06 08:21 PM

Nicely done Tim...in true form!!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

3 posted 2000-07-13 11:33 PM

can picture this very well...this is vivid to me..well done

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

4 posted 2002-02-11 04:41 PM

well done, I like it

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