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mia Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 118 |
Forgive me for I cannot grasp thoughts feelings words I do not understand how you can whisper love when you have yet to see what makes me your words enchant my heart but they remain lies |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Thank you, Mia. A jaundiced look at an ealry relationship. You capture a skeptical attitude well. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Mia....I understand this one quite well.....there are so many that make promises before they care to see who you really are. How can you love someone you do not know? ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Poetwheel Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 208Canada |
A nice poem Mia. But I don't really think that the words people say in the beginning are necessarily lies. It is a powerful thing, the beginnings of the spark between two people. Sometimes you make things seem more important that they are, despite the fledgling nature of the relationship. I am sure we are all guilty of it. Niceley done Mia, you managed to make me actually _think_ about something  ------------------ Poetic Wheelbarrow http://www.stormloader.com/poetwheel/den.html ICQ: 44370408 |
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Alain DeLaCendres Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 119Ohio |
Very thoughful... I like it mia. Keep posting and I'll keep reading. ------------------ Tout s'en va, tout passe, l'eau coule, et le couer oublie. |
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very thought-provoking words. I think sometimes we say what we hope to be true, without having had time to know yet for sure. Thank you, Mia. |
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