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vietkidd1
New Member

since 1999-08-10

Posts 2
Sacramento,CA,USA

0 posted 1999-08-10 12:21 PM

WhAt Is A gIrL

what is a girl...

who doesn't care...

what is a girl...

who aint so fair....

I wish I met a girl so kind....

to show me, that I do mind...

within her heart, I wish I knew....

what was wrong, that made her do....

do is what I do not know...

why? she does not show...

what is a girl...

who doesn't care...

what is a girl...

who aint so fair....

when I see you, I cannot bare....

to see your face, I do not dare...

life's so miserable without her near...

for that, there is no cure...

I wish I met a girl to share a thought...

and given me the love she brought...

what is a girl...

who doesn't care...

what is a girl...

who aint so fair....

If only I met a girl so nice...

but that can be at a daring price....

I hope one day a girl so sweet...

could show me how to live, not to weep....

why can't I just meet a girl...

to share our lives together in this world....

to cherish eachother....

thinking of one another......

what is a girl...

who doesn't care...

what is a girl...

who aint so fair....

I can't understand, why I cannot see....

a person nomore then a deadly tree....

I wish I met a girl who understands....

what I feel is all that I demand....

so why can't you see what is tru....

all I can think about is only you....

what is a girl...

who doesn't care...

what is a girl...

who aint so fair....

so now I end this life of hell....

wishing I lived a life so well...

I pray one day I meet you soon...

a girl so pretty she glows like the moon....

if I met a girl that cares...

all I can say in a life unfair....

I love her so, shes my destiny...

I wish I knew her fantasies....

but I can't see why it cannot be...

but a dream I wish, I wish to see....

what is a girl...

who doesn't care...

what is a girl...

who aint so fair....

so now back to reality...

I meet a girl who does not see...

how much she means to me....

so down I lay, I dream away...

finding a path to lead my way....

to find a girl who cares for me....

and not a girl who hates to see,

her life living with me.....

what is a girl...

who doesn't care...

what is a girl...

who aint so fair....

written by vietkidd

blueloon
Member

since 1999-07-07

Posts 161
NY

1 posted 1999-08-10 12:25 PM

They always say the minute you stop looking is the mere minute that someone will step into your life. Stop looking and keep writing. I really enjoyed this poem!
blueloon

Delores Hall
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 342
USA

2 posted 1999-08-11 12:46 PM

Nice poem.I enjoyed it.

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