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Nightmare lake |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
The lake now lies still, beyond the moonlight, so evil so corrupt, it swallowed my love, as i stood on the bank, worthless and vunerable, the sun gives me no comfort, cant hide the past, cant burn my eyes, i see her eternally in my mind, so close but always far away, lost in the pain of watery dread, i would take her place among the swampy shore, im lost without my light, if only god would end my plight ------------------ |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
free verse with a rhymed ending, most interesting  |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Yes, quite interesting..but it seems to work, for I liked this! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood |
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