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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Common They say she has a common way, With a very common say. And that she talks a common talk, With a very common walk. Her manners are of common lace And they say of common grace. She has a very common smile And her eyes a common style. Her laughter is a common round, Just an average common sound, But when she lays her hand in mine, All that's common, turns divine. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I thought this was great! Loved the end!!! |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
A very uncommon poem. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
sweet, Seymour  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Great, as per usual! Love the one line break without the word 'common'. You know if it had 2 more lines it could be a contemporary sonnet, with a couplet at the end. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
All of the above my dear friend I thank. Thank you for your comments and read. |
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